Bio info for ABOUT section on page

Contribution ID #240817-011436-999000

I'm very confused as to why my biographical information was DECLINED when so many bios that I read in the ABOUT sections on members' pages state information completely similar to mine.  I read the IMDB PRO bio guidelines attached to the declination, but it offers no help as to why other members' similar info was approved.  Please can someone point out to me specifically what was not in accordance with the rules in my bio so that I can be clear and revise?  

Thank you!