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Explanations regarding 2 declined submissions, one of which already exists on 1 other page among other matters
Good evening,
Regarding these specific ticket numbers #250117-084827-423000 and #250116-103038-618000:
Starting in order, the relevance premise of the first ticket number and the entries is it expands on the mirror image and parody models of real-life email financial extortion, phishing lures and scams that were included in a 2008 game utilizing the recent real life world usage of Internet as well as a first in the entire series to have this Internet. That is covering the #2 part of the entry, whereas the #1 covers a one part detail of the entire website, noting the connection to how obvious the game website is obvious human trafficking that it tries and appeal to the client there is no 9 month pregnancy and nor the 9 month alcohol abstinence, this all would follow the same as the current content included. Next, there is also the apparently declined attempt at fixing a spelling mistake as noted in the explanation which would have been visible in comparing the two, especially as no other content was added besides the spelling mistake repair.
Next, there is also the #4 piece where I simply transferred the same content currently in public view at the Manhunt 2 page ( https://www.imdb.com/title/tt1086334/?ref_=ttcnn_ov in exact word to word phrasing).
As for the second ticket number, the commercials are an expansion in what the game atmosphere includes, I especially searched for all that had the widest online and video documentation of them to show this actually exists in all detail as included in the entries, as well as the intended peculiar model after real life commercials that are instead modeled into the game to give it life.
As a game also known for its extended depressive story where at least one family or friend character has to be murdered, unlike GTA V where there was an implemented Alternative C to not killing one of these characters, it would illustrate there is a number of comedic turns in the game (including some unquestionably understood as nothing else but this including obvious puns) although subtle as these have to be searched and not all are part of the otherwise storyline mode.
In specific of some of these entries, another relation to the "PointClickShipABitch" was another real life parody of the new to the stories Eastern European mail order bride registry as well as that one of the bride candidates mentions Vice City and a Vice City TV show, from a previous series game.
Also regarding company and product parodies, of which exist among those a New York-based company Verizon being parodied, it also parodies real life gerrymandering in politics and also real life political playing field tactics.
Rereading the line starting with "there is also the sister product Alcotine which caters to brain surgeons tired of monotomy", I now noticed another spelling mistake in monotony. I also did not notice a previous spelling mistake as well in the line "The Civil Service computer game opens" where it should segregation instead.
A note about the email spam was to also demonstrate how detailed
Content, online, radio and TV script producer Lazlow also noted the far depths that they go with this in https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2JGmLsmUmz4 (6:04-7:00, 8:55-(9:48, 10:55-12:10 and 12:55:14:07)
Specifically in the 10:55-12:10, Lazlow mentions "we like to bury things for people to find", "it was not a small process to write an Internet", "we love putting stuff like that [random websites on the game search engine]) which was the intended point to include all this which is, as the links show existing but not yet compiled into a piece of its own in addition to other obvious spoofs of real life products or a creative take on it.
These invented commercials and dialogue lines are also in light of then-current events at the time ranging of controversial immigration topics, police brutality and inside cover jobs of the incidents in the US society as well as what was and continued to be gentrification across the US and also sexual harassment claims and settlements, which is also documented in the entry lines.
The SixFigures drug trafficking recruitment, though thinly veiled as it is visible to see what the website's intentions are, is also a double play on that real life recruitment but also a similar premise to what was same tactics by terrorist recruiters. On this subject, I had also expanded context how the game parodied real life financial extortion, as mentioned before and how this closely related to what was in present text in its current reading.
Thank you your attention in advance,
Maya
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3 months ago
Hi Krkv6-
Thank you for posting the submission reference numbers! Further reviewing, this submission 250117-084827-423000 has been submitted on your behalf and approved. As per the second one, you are welcome to resubmit them but will recommend editing the 2 trivias that are too long in this case.
You can then post the re-submission reference number here and we can help you take another look.'
Cheers!
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