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Image deletion and plot outline corrections
Hi,
Please find here below 4 contributions I made that were declined, but I do not understand why.
1- Chernobyl (2019) - Image deletion:
There is a duplication on this IMDb page for this TV show (image present twice, being exactly the same):
https://m.imdb.com/title/tt7366338/mediaviewer/rm87401729
https://m.imdb.com/title/tt7366338/mediaviewer/rm2282396161
You can choose the one you delete, but there is one too much.
Please find my contribution:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250320-230248-386202
2- Miss Stevens (2016) - Mexican Spanish plot outline:
First, the teacher is a woman, so it is better to use « una profesora ». I also prefer staying neutral in my wording, without using any unnecessary melodramatic tone (« con el corazon roto »). Please find evidence :
https://www.filmaffinity.com/mx/film563252.html
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Miss_Stevens
Here is my contribution here after: https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250319-001823-699000
3- Consequences (2018) - Mexican Spanish plot outline:
The current Mexican Spanish plot outline is too long and written in only one sentence, which makes it difficult to read. I split it into two sentences, in order to have a break and allow the reader to breathe. Please find evidence:
https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Posledice_(pel%C3%ADcula)
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Consequences_(2018_film)
Here is my contribution: https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250315-205221-323000
4- Port Authority (2019) - Mexican Spanish plot outline:
The current plot outline is too long, written in only one sentence, which makes it difficult to read. It also includes unnecessary information: « ambientada », « esta historia relata », etc. I decided to focus on what was important for the reader, without unveiling too much. Please find evidence:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Port_Authority_(film)
Here is my contribution: https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250319-000612-970000
Thanks for your answer.
Best regards
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