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I need help with a review I wrote for the Mandalorian and Grogu. The submission # is 260524-130056-496221. A link is below. I wrote it as a song but it was autoformatted into one paragraph. Can it be updated to the below? I also edited one paragraph.
(Sung to the tune of "Brandy" by Looking Glass)
A Bounty Hunter, sci-fi- western play
and it streams a million views a day
lonely fanboys want it just their way
they talk from their basement homes
They cheer and holler, when he walks in town
and they love him knocking AT-ATs down
but when more puppets, start to come around
they gotta log on and whine
the fanboys say Mando, you're a bad man
(baby) (Grogu)
what a hard R, you could be
(baby) (Grogu)
but your show, your film and your rating, is PG
(baby Grogu is so, so cute)
Mando, wears armored beskar steel
and he tell baby Grogu to heel
the Rebels made us a deal, to rescue Roid Rage the Hutt
So he goes, to fight the whole chess board
with flames and rockets, and a cool wrist cord
but baby Grogu, started to get bored
He's your co-star and co-billed
the fanboys say Mando, you're a bad man
(baby) (Grogu)
what a hard R, you could be
(baby) (Grogu)
but your show, your film and your rating, is PG
(baby Grogu is so, so cute)
Mando had Carl Weathers and some IG droids, a creepy Ugnaught, was his boy
now its these old folks, and some puppet toys
he knows those fanboys will rage
He's gotta tell his truth, he knows he's a bad, bad man
and those fanboys (fanboys) will have to understand
(plush dolls, sell dolls)
(plush dolls, sell dolls)
So at night, when Sigourney's not around
and Dave Filoni, sets his cowboy hat down
his action figure makes those R rated sounds
and whispers "this is the way"
the fanboys say Mando, you're a bad man
(baby) (Grogu)
what a hard R, you could be
(baby) (Grogu)
but your show, your film and your rating, is PG
(baby Grogu is so, so cute)
https://www.imdb.com/title/tt30825738/review/rw11495249/?ref_=up_ururv
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