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Plot outline corrections declined
Hi,
I submitted the three plot outlines corrections here after, but they were declined and I do not understand why.
1- Miss Stevens (2016) - Portuguese plot outline:
Here is my contribution: https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250317-182538-657000
There is a unnecessary comma placed before a conjugated verb. Moreover, I prefer a neutral wording, without using any unnecessary melodramatic tone (« com o coracao partido »). Please find evidence: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Miss_Stevens
2- Anora (2024) - Portuguese plot outline:
Here is my contribution: https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250317-193631-627000
I tried to avoid repetitions and awkward wording (the 2 subordinate clauses introduced by « quando » in the same sentence). Please find evidence: https://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anora
3- Port Authority (2019) - Mexican Spanish plot outline:
Here is my contribution: https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250323-213113-286000
The current plot outline is written in only one long sentence, which makes it difficult to read. There are unnecessary words like « esta historia relata ». Please find evidence: https://www.filmaffinity.com/mx/film465921.html
Thanks for your help
Best regards
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