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Plot outline corrections
Hi,
Here are 3 plot outline corrections I asked for that were declined:
1- Spare Keys (« Fifi » as original French title):
The current English plot outline is ambiguous and suggests a romantic story. As I saw the film, I prefer talking about a « budding relationship » than « a romantic relationship ». Indeed, none of both protagonists cross the line, the girl being 15 years old and the guy being 23 years old. It’s more about a platonic relationship that grows, unfolds and make both protagonists change during the movie.
Here is my contribution:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250124-182636-923000
Here is a movie review in English:
https://cineuropa.org/en/newsdetail/430879
2- Un Verano Con Fifi (« Fifi » as original French title):
See my « 1- » here above, as it is the same movie and the same kind of problem with the Spanish (Mexico) plot outline (« romantic relationship » instead of « budding relationship »).
Here is my contribution:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250128-124510-180000
Here is a movie review in Spanish:
https://www.elcinedeloqueyotediga.net/pelicula/show/un-verano-con-fifi
3- Asteroid City:
The current Spanish (Mexico) plot outline is quite long (supposed to be short) and we can say the same thing with fewer words.
Here is my contribution:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250128-122708-185000
Here is the Spanish Wikipedia page of the movie:
https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asteroid_City
Best regards
Accepted Solution
Michelle
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3 months ago
Hi @Sebastien -
I have reviewed these Plot Outlines and the changes have now been approved. They should be live on the site shortly.
Cheers!
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