Plot Outline for My Instant Death Ability Is So Overpowered in German

https://www.imdb.com/de/title/tt30146725/reference/ My correction was declined because of "Does not meet contribution guidelines." Really? You're currently offering a text that's not only poor German, but also stops mid-sentence. Right now, it looks as if the English text would read something like this: "A school bus from Japan arrives in another world ruled by a sage who kills the adults and claims". That's where the German text currently ends! I'm once again surprised at how someone who, unlike me, isn't a native speaker, seems to reject the change. It is completely incomprehensible because it is wrong on every level. Do you really want to offer something false? I don't understand. And I can't try again; the software prevents me from trying again. Seriously, I don't understand how this keeps happening. Is someone living out their power fantasies?