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Plot outlines to validate
Hi,
Please find here after several plot outlines corrections that were declined and I do not understand why:
1- The Shiny Shrimps (2019) - Mexican Spanish plot outline:
Here is my contribution:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250405-110227-663000
There is a mistake in the plot outline. The main character is indeed a world vice champion, not an olympic champion. Moreover, the name of the team has to be translated into the Spanish name.
Please find evidence:
https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Al_agua_gambas
https://www.primevideo.com/detail/Al-agua-gambas/0JA1DJ1F5IEP5AFV9NB472EMI1
2- El Reino (2018) - Mexican Spanish plot outline:
Here is my contribution:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250408-231024-593000
The current plot outline is too vague (« un estilo de vida particular » for instance) and needs to be rephrased.
Please find evidence:
https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/El_reino_(pel%C3%ADcula)
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Realm_(film)
3- El Reino (2018) - Portuguese plot outline:
Here is my contribution:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250408-230456-052000
The Portuguese plot outline is too long and clumsily written. I worked to keep the same meaning but made it shorter.
Please find evidence:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Realm_(film)
https://observador.pt/2018/12/12/filme-el-reino-sobre-politica-e-corrupcao-lidera-nomeacoes-para-premios-goya
4- The Ballad of Buster Scruggs - Portuguese plot outline:
Here is my contribution:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250409-155001-310000
I only replaced « investigador » with « garimpeiro », which is more appropriate here.
Please find evidence:
https://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Ballad_of_Buster_Scruggs
Thanks for your answer
Best regards
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