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Spanish plot outlines to validate
Hi,
Here are several plot outlines in Spanish I worked on that were refused. But I do not understand the reason why:
1- La fractura (2021) :
Here is the IMDb movie page:
https://m.imdb.com/es-es/title/tt13321730
Here are my 2 contributions declined:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-152918-969000
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-220221-282000
These both plot outlines (Spain/Mexico) are too long and not very well written. That is why I tried to make them shorter and more accurate.
Please find evidence:
https://www.filmaffinity.com/es/film311386.html
https://www.filmin.es/pelicula/la-fractura
2- The Father (2020):
Here is the IMDb movie page:
https://m.imdb.com/es-es/title/tt10272386
Here is my contribution declined:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-221631-240000
I worked to improve the clarity of the plot outline. Please find evidence:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Father_(2020_film)
https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/El_Padre_(película)
3- The French Dispatch (2021):
https://m.imdb.com/es-es/title/tt8847712
Here is my contribution declined:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-222257-830000
I also worked to improve its clarity. Please find evidence:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_French_Dispatch
https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_French_Dispatch
4- Asterix y Cleopatra (1968):
Here is the IMDb page:
https://m.imdb.com/es-es/title/tt0062687
Here is my contribution declined:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-230437-121000
There is a mistake in the current plot outline. It is not « 3 months or more », but « 3 months maximum ». Please find evidence:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asterix_and_Cleopatra_(film)
5- Boiling Point (2021):
Here is the IMDb page:
https://m.imdb.com/es-es/title/tt11127680
Here is my contribution declined:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-215753-806000
The current plot outline is clumsily written. We do not say for instance « forma parte de la presion » and we can avoid having twice the word « cocina ». Please find evidence:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boiling_Point_(2021_film)
6- The King’s Man (2021):
Here is the IMDb page:
https://m.imdb.com/es-es/title/tt6856242
Here is my contribution declined:
https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-223112-625000
There is no need to use the future tense on one verb and it is better to use the conditional for another one. Please find evidence:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_King%27s_Man
Thanks for your answer.
Best regards
Accepted Solution
Maya
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2 months ago
Hi Sebastien-
Thank you for posting the information and the submission reference numbers! After further reviewing, all have been re-submitted on your behalf and approved. The changes will be live on the site shortly.
Cheers!
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