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Wednesday, February 19th, 2025 4:31 PM

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Spanish plot outlines to validate

Hi,

Here are several plot outlines in Spanish I worked on that were refused. But I do not understand the reason why:

1- La fractura (2021) :

Here is the IMDb movie page:

https://m.imdb.com/es-es/title/tt13321730

Here are my 2 contributions declined:

https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-152918-969000

https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-220221-282000

These both plot outlines (Spain/Mexico) are too long and not very well written. That is why I tried to make them shorter and more accurate.

Please find evidence:

https://www.filmaffinity.com/es/film311386.html

https://www.filmin.es/pelicula/la-fractura

2- The Father (2020):

Here is the IMDb movie page:

https://m.imdb.com/es-es/title/tt10272386

Here is my contribution declined:

https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-221631-240000

I worked to improve the clarity of the plot outline. Please find evidence:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Father_(2020_film)

https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/El_Padre_(película)

3- The French Dispatch (2021):

Here is the IMDb movie page:

https://m.imdb.com/es-es/title/tt8847712

Here is my contribution declined:

https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-222257-830000

I also worked to improve its clarity. Please find evidence:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_French_Dispatch

https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_French_Dispatch

4- Asterix y Cleopatra (1968):

Here is the IMDb page:

https://m.imdb.com/es-es/title/tt0062687

Here is my contribution declined:

https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-230437-121000

There is a mistake in the current plot outline. It is not « 3 months or more », but « 3 months maximum ». Please find evidence:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asterix_and_Cleopatra_(film)



5- Boiling Point (2021):

Here is the IMDb page:

https://m.imdb.com/es-es/title/tt11127680

Here is my contribution declined:

https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-215753-806000

The current plot outline is clumsily written. We do not say for instance « forma parte de la presion » and we can avoid having twice the word « cocina ». Please find evidence:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boiling_Point_(2021_film)



6- The King’s Man (2021):

Here is the IMDb page:

https://m.imdb.com/es-es/title/tt6856242

Here is my contribution declined:

https://contribute.imdb.com/contribution/250218-223112-625000

There is no need to use the future tense on one verb and it is better to use the conditional for another one. Please find evidence:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_King%27s_Man

Thanks for your answer.

Best regards

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2 months ago

Hi Sebastien-

Thank you for posting the information and the submission reference numbers! After further reviewing, all have been re-submitted on your behalf and approved. The changes will be live on the site shortly. 

Cheers! 

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